There’s nothing wrong with that deck. It’s a DoomTown deck on two strong shooting values (although I prefer 5’s and 10’s instead of 5’s and Q’s), out of a home that lets you play a weaker structure effectively. To be honest, aside from the OP home, that deck is what doomtown should be. Building the town and being able to fight to protect it.
Since I omitted it: I won two sheriff events this year, both with the following deck Shooty Slide · DoomtownDB